Big Orange,
Yup, the whole forum is quite dead. Anyhow , as drawing is not one of my strong points I feel it would be hypocrital on my part making any negative comments: any piece of hand drawn art I make would probably look awful, specially when drawing human figures.
What I can do is recomend you software so your art gets a more polished look.
http://my.smithmicro.com/manga-studio-5.html